Red Writing Hood Link-Up: Active Voice

For Today, we gave you a short challenge. Three fairly generic passive phrases. Your goal wass to make them active in a short scene, either fiction or non-fiction. You could choose one, two, or all three to play with, but you only had 100 words.

[he/she/I] was devastated by [...]
[feeling] was experienced by [...]
[person/thing] was possessed by [...]

I got caught up in devastation in Brushfire Madness.

Angela’s character hears some news in The Pre-Party.

Link up below with your response to the prompt. Since responses are efficient and short today, let’s all stretch ourselves and read a few new blogs this weekend!



3 Responses to Red Writing Hood Link-Up: Active Voice
  1. Fate. | My Word Your Ear.com
    June 22, 2012 | 2:19 am

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  2. barbara @ de rebus
    June 22, 2012 | 6:58 am

    Melanie @ M&M – you linked back to this page, instead of your blog!!

    :)

  3. Melanie @ M&M
    June 22, 2012 | 6:47 pm

    I set up a second link at #25 since my first link wasn’t working, but I don’t know how to delete the first one (#13). Just FYI.
    Thanks!

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